I have been waiting for this the hole time as I have been at camp and my hole life!.
I get my helmet on and get my torch and go to the cars we get in the car that we where told to.
We go down to the caves and carefully down the step and go in the cave.
We go down to the low spot and then I finish then i said in my head ya i did it.
Purpose: To tell about an experience from camp, using short sentences to create suspense.
WALT: Entertain (recount)
Task: To write a recount based on something scary or suspenseful that happened to you.
Jake - this is a really good start to your writing, but I want to know more! What was it like in the cave? How did you feel?
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