description: for 2 days we have been doing some writing we have been learning about IMPACT.
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Success criterria:
Have I used descriptive verbs?
Have I used precise nouns?
Have I added adjectives to describe some nouns?
Publish story:⬇️
I am zooming through the huge bright grass. I wish I could be BIG!!! I hate my life all the balls are mean to me because I am so small and smelly. I get pushed around sloping everywhere. I am so hairy and am pushed by those stupid dung beetles I hate being a dung ball.
Feedback/feedforward: I think you did good on using a lot of similies I reckon you could work on using more detail though.#jahkarn
Evalaution: I think I did good at my plan but I might need to add some more adjectives, nouns, precise nouns, verbs and descriptive verb.
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