description: for 2 days we have been doing some writing we have been learning about IMPACT.
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Success criterria:
Have I used descriptive verbs?
Have I used precise nouns?
Have I added adjectives to describe some nouns?
Publish story:⬇️
I am zooming through the huge bright grass. I wish I could be BIG!!! I hate my life all the balls are mean to me because I am so small and smelly. I get pushed around sloping everywhere. I am so hairy and am pushed by those stupid dung beetles I hate being a dung ball.
Feedback/feedforward: I think you did good on using a lot of similies I reckon you could work on using more detail though.#jahkarn
Evalaution: I think I did good at my plan but I might need to add some more adjectives, nouns, precise nouns, verbs and descriptive verb.
Description: For the last few weeks we have been doing Science with Ebony,Elly and Troy I was doing mine with ebony we we're learning about biology and behaviour adaption's.
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Success criterria:
Thinking like a scientist.
Talking like a scientist.
Acting like a scientist.
Feedback/feedforward:I really like the animal you chooses but you could make you image more funky Keep walking the talk. #jetty
Evaluation: Thanks Jett for the Feedback/feedforward next time I will make it more funky I like how I set out my post it is making it so you can read it.
Description: Today we had to do reading profile. My goal is comprehension in comprehension we are learning Mine was about the hare and the tortoise. Success criterria: Text to text: It is when you have read a book and you had read a other book a they mean the same kind of stuff. Text to self: when you read a book and something happens and i has happen to you also. Text to world: when you relate to the world around you when you have book and the same thing happens. Question I answers: Who won the race and how? The tortoise because he was slow so, the hare thought I can have a sleep, because that tortoise is so slow an then the tortoise won. What was the moral (or lesson that can be learned) from the story? Never think that your the fastest. Don't be mean to others. All way believe in yourself. Keep on going. Write one text to self connection you have made with the story. I would not care if I lost agents a fast person because they might be a sore winner. Write one text to text connection you have made with the story. It does not matter if you win or lose because if you run again with the same person you could win. Feedback/feedforward: on question 2 you could give more detail because the greatest at what maths? You did well on question 1 at explaining because I understand how the tortoise won.logan Evaluation: thanks logan I fix up what you said I could do next time. I think for next time I need to put a bit more on question 2 because I didn't do that much about the moral of the story.
Description:Every week we learn about skills and movement that will help us play sports. This term’s focus has been around defense. We made a video showing some of the goals we have been practicing. I have highlighted the thing I think I have done well YELLOW and one thing I would like to work on PINK.
WALT: Defensive skills and movements Success Criteria: Body Movement Weight on balls of feet Feet shoulder width apart Knees flexed Concentration and eyes on ball, head and eyes up Push hard off outside foot and go forwards to attack pass Quick small feet, stay on balls of feet Arms within confines of body Take feet to ball Land with a SBP Intercepting Body angled to see player and ball Anticipate pass and player movement Restrictive Marking Meet player as they start towards the ball/where they want to go stay close to the attacking player Head and eyes up, arms close to body to avoid obstruction/contact Angle body so attacking player is ‘pushed’ away from where he/she wants to go 0.9m from ball carrier
Evaluation: I think we did well because me and my friends got three video on. All so I did go easy on myself but then I went hard on myself. I am good at getting the Ball of the person but not good at passing the ball to people.
Feedback/Feedforward: I think you did well but you could improve on staying away from the person with the ball. Logan
