Thursday 21 August 2014

the learning pit

WALA: The Learning Pit

Description: We have been learning about when good learning happens.  

Task: Share what you know about the learning pit.

Criteria:
Draw the Learning Pit.
List at least 3 feelings that you might have when you are in the pit.
List at least 3 strategies that you could use to get out of the pit.
Label where good learning happens.
List 3 things you could say to yourself when you are in the pit.


Evaluation:
Reflect on a time when you have been in the pit.
when I was at inqury i had to think of a qiustion and anwers it and i was rushing then we went down to the mat and then the teacher toled use that we had until next wednesday.

How did you feel when you were in the pit?  
very challenged, it was hard.

What did you do to work out of the pit?
well I keep myself on the track.

Feedback/Feedforward: I think that  you made your writing very nice, readable and clear. But you could work towards making how the learning pit looks more detailed.#Ben

Monday 18 August 2014

My writing

                                                                My family

The important thing about my family is that they are my family and I love them. They work hard to get food and water. They keep me and my sister safe. They get the money for the device's and the house , cars, school, heater's and more. but the important thing about my family is that they are my family and I love them. 


Wednesday 13 August 2014

The giant squid article.


http://www.kiwikidsnews.co.nz/giant-squid-te-papa

Te Reo poster




Greetings in māori


KIA ORA (hello)

like kia ora nice to meet you

Tēnā Koe hello (to one person)


Tēnā kōrua hello (to two poeple


Tēnā koutou hello (to three or more people)

Happy- harikoa

Good-pai

Excited-manahau

Sleepy-hiamoe

Thirsty-hiainu

Grumpy-kiriweti

Nervous-āmaimaie

Angry-riri

Pleased-pāre

tired-ngēngē

warm-māhana

hot-wera

cold-makariri




WALT: communicate a message.


Description: We have been participating in 3 different workshops around colour, compositions and fonts.  We put these skills to use in a poster sharing our knowledge about Te Reo Maori.

Why? We have noticed that our posters are too cluttered and do not communicate a  message well.


Task: Make a poster about Te Reo Maori.


Criteria:

Message: My message is clear and purposeful.  Everything that is on my poster relates to my message. 


Composition:  My poster is balanced. 


Font:  My font is clear, readable and suits the message.


Colour:  I have used 2-3 colours that are complementary.  My background choice makes the text pop!


Accuracy:  All of the words on my poster are spelt correctly.


Evaluation:

What are you most proud of and why? 

The colour because suits the words.


What challenged you the most and why?

Time limit because I was trying to think what I should put on it.


Next time, what is a goal you can work towards?

Going faster and working on it more.


Feedback/Feedforward:


I think you could improve on making the colours where the poster is a little bit different to each other.


But I liked how you had it very neat in one page so you didn't have to look everywhere to read it. 


Ben Perry :)