Poetry Cinquain :B

Description: In Troy's writing group (poetry).We are doing Cinquains. We had to make a Cinquain about our own passion. You have to have it so the first line has 2 syllables, next 4 then 6, 8 after that then 2 again.

link: https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/14s0Z9AIovOBEwwhZW1gRqutQA-4RQbcm2K5rMuj4e30/embed?start=false&loop=false&delayms=3000

Publish piece:

SPEED!

Vroom.

It's gona start.

Zooming , Booming , Grooving.

Getting around the track in a flash.

V8 Holden.

Publish piece 2:

Lily

Snuggle.

Deep sleep quiet.

Snoring,cuddling,walking.

Puffy Up paws sharp knife claws.

My cat.

Publish piece 3:

Guns,guns,guns

Bang bang.

Load flip fury.

Shooting,booming,running.

Dodging like a speedy sniper.

Nerf wars.

Feedback/feedforward: I like your poems but next time you can make the titles more clearer/ I like your poems but the third peace is my fav. Corton

evalaution: i think that i did well because i got three poems done but i could put a bit more description in my writing.