Sunday, 6 December 2015

congitive wobble

I think I am a Self Managing learner because I am not open to the congitive wobble.
The goal that I am currently working on is I am open to the congitive wobble.
The things I need to do to achieve this goal are a open mind teacher help and a growth mindset.

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Sunday, 29 November 2015

Poetry Cinquain :B

Description: In Troy's writing group (poetry).We are doing Cinquains. We had to make a Cinquain about our own passion. You have to have it so the first line has 2 syllables, next 4 then 6, 8 after that then 2 again.
Publish piece:
SPEED!
Vroom.
It's gona start.
Zooming , Booming , Grooving.
Getting around the track in a flash.
V8 Holden.

Publish piece 2:
Lily
Snuggle.
Deep sleep quiet.
Snoring,cuddling,walking.
Puffy Up paws sharp knife claws.
My cat.

Publish piece 3:
Guns,guns,guns
Bang bang.
Load flip fury.
Shooting,booming,running.
Dodging like a speedy sniper.
Nerf wars.

Feedback/feedforward: I like your poems but next time you can make the titles more clearer/ I like your poems but the third peace is my fav. Corton

evalaution: i think that i did well because i got three poems done but i could put a bit more description in my writing.

Wednesday, 25 November 2015

Ingry post

Description: this term we have been doing inquiry.I am doing canines arcade.We have to make cardboard arcade machines.Our arcade machine is 2 ideas in one.So I think that's Thinking outside the box.It can effect other people because they can play our games.Then they can make there own at the there house.They could do what other people are doing around the world.

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Question:

What did you accomplish? A cardboard arcade game that people can play my game so can be inspired.

What was the most frustrating? When Logan and Ben weren't doing any thing and I thought of what they had to do but they made the name that's all basically.

What was your proudest moment in your inquiry?letting people play our game and seeing the people enjoying it.

How might your inquiry help you in the future? People will get of there devices and play our cardboard games.

What made you choose this inquiry? I wanted to try something that would be deferent and it would be fun.



Tuesday, 17 November 2015

Free verse writing

Publish piece:
I wake up, 
I have awoken,
awoken in a cold cold bed.
Where am I? Mum, dad and my sister are all here.
I’m safe,
But the pain,
Pain so much of it.
I see lots of machines,
machines everywhere all around me.
I have the thing that I had in my mouth at the start. 
I get taken to another room with a bed right near the door,
I go next to the window,
a big window the sun is shining in.
the machines are back.

Evaluation:

1) I used the 5 senses, (feel,hear,see,taste,smell) I think I used all of them.

2)I used visual imagery  

3)I think next time I would put a bit more detail.

Monday, 26 October 2015

Quick write

Once there was a boy named rocky he was 6 and he love playing with devils and one day he got a the devil king he played with it as much as he could then he left his devil king in his room and when he went to sleep the devil king came a live and started freaking him out the devil king started to hide and then......................tap tap SSSSSSSCCCCCCRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEECCCCCCHHHHHH................... drip drip drip drip then the boy started get very frecked out that he started to run to his mum and dad thought that he was  lieand they went back to sleep rocky went to sleep then..............................

WARNING: if you every get the devil king don't leave it in your room!

Thursday, 22 October 2015

Blooms.

Where is he right now? We don't know right now but I'm sure he's somewhere making trouble hence his nickname.

Describe what Greg jones looks like: well we know he has curly hair normal clothes and he's pretty weak.

Why do you think Greg Jone is so bad: we don't know why maybe he just has bad accidents a lot of the time.

What is your opinion of bargain bob: That there is something fishy going on with him and I don't think I would trust him.

Why do you think bargain bob moves a lot: so then when he is doing bad things so he doesn't want to stay in the same place.

Sunday, 18 October 2015

Discovery time

Today I did: a minecraft for our tag that we are playing on minecraft.

I showed Creativity by: making my house and making it so it looks little bit better.

I showed Agency by: staying on task and kept going.

I showed Excellence by: fixing up my house and making it look better

Next week I am going to: Cary on.

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