Description:My goal in writing is to included some complex sentences.it came from my book in some sentences How are you trying to get better at it? I am going to add more complex sentences in my writing.
Here is the image we used for motivation:
Big idea:
Feedback/Feedforward:I like the way you did little paragraphs. Shaiv.
Next time don't do the image to big. Ok. Shaiv.
Evaluation: Thanks for the feedback and feedforward shaiv I like how I put in paragraphs but I think I could of put more writing in m y story it would of made it more fun.